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 <para>
 Slackware's installation is a bit more simplistic than that of most
-other Linux distributions, and is very reminiscent of installing one of the
+other Linux distributions and is very reminiscent of installing one of the
 varieties of BSD operating systems.  If you're familiar with those, you
 should feel right at home.  If you've never installed Slackware or used
 a distribution that makes use of a non-graphical installer, you may
@@ -124,16 +124,18 @@ slackware login: <userinput>root</userinput>
 
 <para>
 Unlike other Linux distributions which boot you directly into a
-dedicated installer program, Slackware's installer gives you a limited
-Linux distribution contained in your system's RAM from the word go. This 
+dedicated installer program, Slackware's installer drops you into a 
+limited Linux distribution loaded into your system's RAM.  This 
 limited distribution is then used to run all the installation programs
 manually, or can be used in emergencies to fix a broken system that
 fails to boot. Now that you're logged in as root (there is no password
 within the installer) it's time to start setting up your disks. At this
-point, you may setup software RAID or LVM support if you wish, but
+point, you may setup software RAID or LVM support if you wish or even
+an encrypted root partition, but
 those topics are outside of the scope of this book. I encourage you to
-refer to the excellent <filename>README_RAID.TXT</filename> and
-<filename>README_LVM.TXT</filename> files on your CD if you desire to
+refer to the excellent <filename>README_RAID.TXT</filename>,
+<filename>README_LVM.TXT</filename>, and
+<filename>README_CRYPT.TXT</filename> files on your CD if you desire to
 setup your system with these advanced tools. Most users won't have any
 need to do so and should proceed directly to partitioning.
 </para>