From 26e9baa1b21e233d4e16c4359cba7b23d230727a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alan Hicks Date: Thu, 14 Apr 2011 01:46:43 -0400 Subject: preface.xml - s/it's/its/;s/changes/change's/ - Lowercase "window managers" - Expand OS to "operating systems" - set phrase off with commas and replace a conjunction that made the sentence start to sound run-on with a dash Thanks to slakmagik --- preface.xml | 11 ++++++----- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) (limited to 'preface.xml') diff --git a/preface.xml b/preface.xml index a60f05e..7b3aba8 100644 --- a/preface.xml +++ b/preface.xml @@ -21,11 +21,12 @@ Slackware Linux may be one of the oldest surviving Linux distributions but that does not mean it has to be left behind. While Slackware does -aim to maintain it's traditional UNIX roots and values, there is no -escaping "progress". Subsystems change, Window Managers come and go and -new ways are devised to manage the complexities of a modern OS. -While we do resist change for changes sake, it's inevitable that as -things evolve documentation becomes stale and books are no exception. +aim to maintain its traditional UNIX roots and values, there is no +escaping "progress". Subsystems change, window managers come and go and +new ways are devised to manage the complexities of a modern operating +system. +While we do resist change for change's sake, it's inevitable that as +things evolve documentation becomes stale — books are no exception. -- cgit v1.2.3