slack-desc: Sync volkerdi's changes in -current

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/slack-desc b/slack-desc
index 43f5398..5aecad4 100644
--- a/slack-desc
+++ b/slack-desc
@@ -1,19 +1,19 @@
 # HOW TO EDIT THIS FILE:
-# The "handy ruler" below makes it easier to edit a package description.  Line
+# The "handy ruler" below makes it easier to edit a package description. Line
 # up the first '|' above the ':' following the base package name, and the '|'
-# on the right side marks the last column you can put a character in.  You must
-# make exactly 11 lines for the formatting to be correct.  It's also
+# on the right side marks the last column you can put a character in. You must
+# make exactly 11 lines for the formatting to be correct. It's also
 # customary to leave one space after the ':'.
 
         |-handy-ruler------------------------------------------------------|
-slackpkg: slackpkg
+slackpkg: slackpkg (Slackware package upgrade manager)
 slackpkg:
-slackpkg: Slackpkg is a package manager for Slackware. It can download,
-slackpkg: upgrade, install, and remove selected packages. With it, you
-slackpkg: can search in the Slackware Package database and find which
-slackpkg: package has the selected file.
+slackpkg: Slackpkg is an upgrade manager for Slackware packages. It can
+slackpkg: download, upgrade, install, and remove selected packages using an
+slackpkg: official Slackware package repository. With it, you can also
+slackpkg: search in the Slackware Package database and find which package
+slackpkg: has the selected file.
 slackpkg:
-slackpkg: Slackpkg DOES NOT replace pkgtool. In fact, Slackpkg uses pkgtool
-slackpkg: for all install|upgrade|remove functions.
+slackpkg: Slackpkg DOESN'T replace the Slackware pkgtools. Actually,
+slackpkg: Slackpkg uses the pkgtools for install/upgrade/remove functions.
 slackpkg:
-slackpkg: Homepage:  https://slackpkg.org