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authorAlan Hicks <alan@lizella.net>2011-04-14 01:46:43 -0400
committerAlan Hicks <alan@lizella.net>2011-04-14 01:46:43 -0400
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preface.xml
- s/it's/its/;s/changes/change's/ - Lowercase "window managers" - Expand OS to "operating systems" - set phrase off with commas and replace a conjunction that made the sentence start to sound run-on with a dash Thanks to slakmagik
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<para>
Slackware Linux may be one of the oldest surviving Linux distributions
but that does not mean it has to be left behind. While Slackware does
-aim to maintain it's traditional UNIX roots and values, there is no
-escaping "progress". Subsystems change, Window Managers come and go and
-new ways are devised to manage the complexities of a modern OS.
-While we do resist change for changes sake, it's inevitable that as
-things evolve documentation becomes stale and books are no exception.
+aim to maintain its traditional UNIX roots and values, there is no
+escaping "progress". Subsystems change, window managers come and go and
+new ways are devised to manage the complexities of a modern operating
+system.
+While we do resist change for change's sake, it's inevitable that as
+things evolve documentation becomes stale &mdash; books are no exception.
</para>
</section>